tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post3135891446278907950..comments2023-04-12T11:23:01.968+01:00Comments on Devils Light Book Blog: A Woman's Place (Speakeasy #93)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07844897998381859128noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-37692684080706675442013-01-24T14:39:43.214+00:002013-01-24T14:39:43.214+00:00Lovely rhythm. Really conveys her anxiety and nerv...Lovely rhythm. Really conveys her anxiety and nerves. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-5616364056312896092013-01-24T08:56:06.889+00:002013-01-24T08:56:06.889+00:00Genius, I managed to delete another comment instea...Genius, I managed to delete another comment instead of publishing (Not going to do it via mobile ANYMORE! Sorry Mod Mom.<br /><br />mod mom beyond indiedom: So well done. Each line conveying so much and the descriptions heightened the feeling of loneliness, desperation, empowerment and strength. So much said so sparingly. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844897998381859128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-44813464417752104412013-01-23T23:30:20.855+00:002013-01-23T23:30:20.855+00:00Fantastic piece Georgina! Love the rhythm as well ...Fantastic piece Georgina! Love the rhythm as well as the theme. My favourite line is this one: "Magnolia apartment, bare walls, a cheap kettle. All testing my mettle" - beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-36620053327327659442013-01-23T23:25:00.156+00:002013-01-23T23:25:00.156+00:00this is awesome. brilliantly told. awesome pace. y...this is awesome. brilliantly told. awesome pace. you got skills.christinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02983259980848913151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-9146491741942840772013-01-23T21:58:11.288+00:002013-01-23T21:58:11.288+00:00This is an amazing poem! I'm glad she escaped ...This is an amazing poem! I'm glad she escaped and hope she finds happiness.Stacie @ Snaps and Bitshttp://www.snapsandbits.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-15813633645624394802013-01-23T17:37:01.477+00:002013-01-23T17:37:01.477+00:00I can't believe how much you told between the ...I can't believe how much you told between the written lines. I think the previous description of carefully crafted is perfect. <br />Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09022540233075643448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-67633000636036265472013-01-22T21:44:56.530+00:002013-01-22T21:44:56.530+00:00Apologies to JackB, I accidentally deleted his com...Apologies to JackB, I accidentally deleted his comment:<br /><br />Jack: I agree with Stephanie, you did capture a life with just a few words. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07844897998381859128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-66907939699885227152013-01-22T19:39:05.722+00:002013-01-22T19:39:05.722+00:00This is terrific. You've captured an entire li...This is terrific. You've captured an entire life in few words. And I love the hope at the end. There's no going back as there so often is in those cases. Nice work!Stephhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117409443842865395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-70793239246187640732013-01-22T18:29:41.496+00:002013-01-22T18:29:41.496+00:00I love the idea of hiding to "get some perspe...I love the idea of hiding to "get some perspective." And, oh, the different ways we hide.Kristinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06281433748053233153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-80537139097608104122013-01-22T17:31:35.436+00:002013-01-22T17:31:35.436+00:00It really was carefully crafted. With such a lot g...It really was carefully crafted. With such a lot going on behind the words.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5838523932513963749.post-60019766235272155152013-01-22T16:10:46.705+00:002013-01-22T16:10:46.705+00:00This is so very carefully crafted -- love the rhym...This is so very carefully crafted -- love the rhyme scheme and the way it's used to ratchet up the tension!IASoupMamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11222652185240780006noreply@blogger.com