I do enjoy writing poetry. I take a different approach when constructing verse than I do when creating fiction. When I'm writing a story I need solitude and the ability to get into The Zone, whereas poetry I could write in a hurricane.
I want my poems to rhyme. I also enjoy words which when placed together play, like instruments in the mouth. I love clackety-clacks, slithering sumptuous sounds, punching punctuation; awesome assonance and alliteration are the way! My poetry projects are verbal constructs of my command of the English Language. In my mind I see them like equations; when rhyming there are a limited number of answers, right? Oh yeah, and I can rhyme with Orange too: door hinge, scavenge, lozenge, challenge... ooh, there's just so much fun to be had with such a venture!
With The Sorcerer I've attempted unconventional stanza, as well as a change rhythm half way through each verse as a vehicle with which to manipulate the pace. As I'm in a good mood today I'm going to show you verse one as a little teaser. Please leave comments and let me know what you think. Signing out for today, see you all soon.
The winter night
was stormy black,
The air was
bitterly cold.
The full Wolf Moon
was icy white,
Shining bright and
bold.
Streams of beams
so silvery thin
Cracked the clouds
apart,
Coursing through
like the misty veins
Of a glowing, glacial
heart.
It shone down on the town below,
Over rooftops
Shimmering so,
Into the homes of Sister’s Knell,
A place you will not know.
The Sorcerer, Verse 1, G Merry
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