A hush descended over the room.
Granny Annika grabbed her broom,
She cleansed the air
By sweeping it bare
Of past transgressions and unseen
gloom.
For the goddess and god, to wit.
A small brass bell,
A goblet as well,
And some salt in a pink glass basket.
Aunt Sue, the twins and Cousin
Sinéad
Had sweet meats and offerings
made.
Dressed in purple,
They cast a circle,
Calling The Guardians to their
aid.
Granny Annika then stepped
forward,
Athame in hand, facing northward,
With hum and chant
She did then incant,
In a solemn voice she conjured:
That we may find happiness soon.
Please help our task,
And grant what we ask,
So we might with your wisdom commune.”
With white silk cloth and with
thread of red
Each declared a hair from their
head
As offering
For good luck to bring,
To return their sister, beloved.
Aunt Sue collected the offering.
Cousin Sinéad began to sing,
Ringing the bell
Thus ending the spell,
Dismissing whom they’d been conjuring.
They all then feasted on the sweet
meats,
Then to the garden with their
treats,
Holding hands tight,
They sat in the night,
Silently connecting their heartbeats.
Then after just a moment or three
The twins they dug a hole, you see.
In the gifts fell
For all time to dwell,
As the witches said “So mote it
be.”
I especially enjoyed the rhyme scheme of this poem. The title is perfect, as well.
ReplyDeleteUgh! Missed an 'a' from the last verse! Now updated,(Grrr). Sorry about that.
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery and the simple construction; makes for a nicely flowing piece!
ReplyDeleteI just love your poetry. You have such an incredible talent and are such a pleasure to read!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, that's very kind of you to say. :)
DeleteBEAUTIFUL!!
ReplyDeleteIt spoke to me of familiar things, and I absolutely loved the rhyme and pacing.
You nailed it.
I like how you did this with verse and rhyme, I don't see that often on these sorts of prompts.
ReplyDeleteNot easy to create a story in verse, but you did really well with this.
ReplyDeleteI like the title and especially love lines 3-5.
ReplyDeleteI usually do not like rhyming poetry...too sing-songy, too elementary but you pulled it off. I love it!
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun response to the propmts! I love the first stanza...
ReplyDeleteLovely! Wonderful rhyming scheme, fantastic story inside the verse!
ReplyDeleteVery clever, I'm jealous. It is really well done.
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant! I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteAb Fab!
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